Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Experimenting with poetry....an expression of the heart in words.

Before a mirror I try to relate this face to the one of the little girl I have replaced.

That little child who giggled and grinned, so filled with joy and love and the quality of innocence I wish she'd kept.

Now she stands so full of confusion and change, a different view of the world she's made. Striving to please, striving for success, longing for acceptance and security.

Will this little girl ever make it?

--- This is something I wrote recently... thought I'd post it.
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6 comments:

  1. ReneeOctober 11, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    Nice! I like it! I especially love the thoughts behind it, they sound like ones I would think! :P Mirrors are one of my favorite things in writing, so I just love this piece.

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  2. James W.October 11, 2011 at 8:39 PM

    Oh man, A cliffhanger. I like how it ends on a question. I'm sure we're all curious to know what will happen to this little girl.

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  3. AnonymousOctober 12, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    I love this, AnaMichele! I like how you ended it with the question "Will this little girl ever make it?" :)

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  4. RachelDeckOctober 12, 2011 at 10:51 AM

    Nice post AnaMichele! This is really interesting, I like the Ending the best...Cliffhangers are the BEST.. like the one from the movie "Inception" at the end of the movie.. SOOOO GOOOOOOODDDDD

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  5. JoannaOctober 12, 2011 at 1:12 PM

    Aww this is beautiful! Good job girlie :) You are so good at writing poetry omg :O im jelly...

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  6. AnaMicheleOctober 15, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    THANK YOU EVERYONE! :)

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